Tuesday, February 10, 2009
I wake up on a gruesome valentines day. The girl that I love is going to be out of town. I still havent told her how I felt. I gave her some flowers that I got on sale from the diner that I spend half of my life at to make ends meet, because they were dieng. I wake up to horrible rock music on the freaking alarm clock. i try to turn it off but just end up turning it up. i procrastinate by surfing the web when i should be getting ready to go back to work at the diner. oh well time to clean the boys. take a shower that is.
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Both posts were a bit jumpy, which might have something to do with his medication. However, he definitely has a voice, a style of speaking that I like. Keep that up.
ReplyDeleteI would like to see him interact with another character, through dialog. I want to see how he would talk. Maybe his forgetfulness would come out there as well?
I thought both posts were a bit confusing, but maybe thats the fault of his forgetfulness?
ReplyDeleteI liked that he seems to have a very unique personality. Maybe he should try interacting with other characters?
I think he would do well with interacting with some other people, and use that to show how different he is form other people